The Pumpkin Matters

August 7, 2011 Mrs TeePot

It’s October 31st and my house is just as plain as it is every other day of the year. The paint is peeling slightly from the walls, not that anyone ever comes round to notice, but I see it. I see that crack in the kitchen window too, and the hole in the wall from my last mistake, who also goes by the name of Joe. I can’t afford to patch up all the things that need doing, some days I can’t afford to eat, but at least I have a home.

The door bell goes, or at least it would if it hadn’t broken a year ago. Actually it is the knock on the door that alerts me to a visitor. I look at the clock, 8pm, no one visits me during the day, let alone in the evening. Unlatching the door, I tentatively open it, it’s not exactly a good neighbourhood so you can’t be too careful, but I don’t see a gang of youths demanding “trick or beating,” instead I see Alan. I can only make out some of his features in the dusk light, but I know it’s him, that big ol’ nose of his gives him away! But more importantly he is holding in front of him a carved pumpin, candlelight shining out from it’s ghoulish face.

“Blessed Samhain,” whispers the non-religious man who I had a “non-date” coffee with earlier this week while I stand, stunned into silence.

A few seconds pass in silence as the gravity of his gesture sinks in. A man who I have spent maybe 3 hours in total talking to has turned up on my doorstep, armed with an, albeit roughly, carved pumpkin wishing me a blessed Samhain when he could  be at the Hallowe’en party his friends had arranged. In 6 years with Joe not once did he even attempt to celebrate with me, he wasn’t even interested in hearing about my hobbies let alone my religion.

Evidently feeling somewhat worried by the silence, Alan tries again; “I read that it goes on your doorstep, lighting the way I think…” he pauses again, I see his brow furrow, his face giving away his panic that he has got it wrong as he places the pumpkin on my step. He stands back up, poised to speak again, but instead I get a grip of myself and throw my arms around him, planting my lips on his and passionately kissing him. As our lips and tongues explore each other on my doorstep I repeat just one work; “Thank you.”

That night was it for me. That was all it took. 27 years, 3 children and a new house later he’s still here, no holes in the walls, no smashed windows, no broken bones. It was foolish of me to fall so fast over that simple gesture, but I don’t care. Even now he brings me a pumpkin, every October, only now we carve it as a family and he sets aside his lack of belief for one night and celebrates.

If I have learnt one thing from the failed loves of my past and the man who has completed me it is this: In love, the pumpkin matters.

 

This post was inspired by the Writing Workshop (which I have been absent from for a few weeks because I suck!). The prompt was “Big Screen” (a film quote), the quote I chose “The Pumpkin Matters” is from The Women (2008).

Mrs TeePot also goes by the name Livi and is a tea drinking, chocolate munching, social networking writer. She is the Snapshot Round Up writer for Britmums and also moonlights at www.urbanvox.net adding some extra raunch to their "Fun & Frolics" column.

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  • http://anabelgray.wordpress.com Anabel Gray

    Wow, I really enjoyed this. You do not say if this is fiction or non-fiction. I love it though very easy to follow. I told my friend just a couple of months ago. There is something no one tells you about when you begin to date as a young woman. There is such a thing as a click factor. It does not matter what he looks like or what he does for a living if he gets you and you get him from the beginning its worth everything.

    • Mrs TeePot

      Thank you :) It”s fiction but I would certainly like the latter part to be reality!

  • http://www.mollysdailykiss.com Molly

    I love this….you really do have great skill as a writer Mrs T. Telling a ‘whole story’ in such a simple way is no easy feat and yet you have done it here beautifully.

    Mollyxxx

    • Mrs TeePot

      aww bless! Thank you sweety! I hate the fact I can only write short stories, I want to be able to write novels! I have grass is greener syndrome! lol!

  • http://funkywelliesrandomthoughts.com/ Funky Wellies

    Oooh… This is so perfect, I was hoping it was reality! I was completely absorbed in your story, thanks for a great read.

    • Mrs TeePot

      Aww thank you :) I’m glad you enjoyed it!